I came across this poem my son, Hagan, wrote some time ago. It is about overnight stays at his grandparent’s place in rural Victoria. It is quite lovely.
at night cars on the highway whisper distance
we are so far from anything
a collection of warm souls
glowing like an ember of the burnt out day
the cars breathe wordless thoughts
the sound of loneliness
is the sound of something passing
but we stay
grandma and grandpa asleep in the one room I have never explored
young famililes in the back room
single males or older siblings alongside
in a lounge room sealed with folding doors
every move a quiet one
from quiet good night to good morning
breakfast a thief’s meal
the day’s plans discussed in conspirator’s tones
the house so still
the closing of cupboards in the kitchen a rough sigh
the carpet in the hall soft and relaxed
becoming cool kitchen lino underfoot
and here’s Ruth, any Ruth
whispering hello with a laugh
as if she’s either not used to whispering
or she’s sorry for waking me
while Nutri-Grain sing their deliciousness into the bowl
the first in a day of pleasures rare and reliable
reminders of things I have always known
that I will belong somewhere, that I am happy
happy now, in a house warm and never stifling
allowing the comfortable movement
of elements between its walls:
air and light, peace and love, enough for all
Yes, that’s wonderful! i hope he keeps up his poetry. Quite a generational link – between Grandad’s love of poetry and Race’s too. Iola
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