Sustenance, sustenance
The needs of my family, the very future
depend on my
Hunter’s skill
Tracking is the game
ignoring the baubles for the meat
persevering when hope is lost
When perseverance is the
only hope to find
As I cross the threshold
between sunshine and artificial light
where my flaming torch
of knowledge and experience
must keep me lit
alert to fallacy and trickery
Nevertheless it dulls
against intensely bright competition
These high ceilinged vaults
as if starlit with halogen and diode
I find it hard to distinguish whether
inflamed or extinguished
my very own light flares
or fades
As does the light of knowledge
or critical elements of judgement
This is a brilliantly ominous
hole in real space
This dead centre of comsupmtion
Of glow worms on mirrored walls of
perverted fairy lights created by evil spirit
I cross a
sinister boundary
into a world of corruption
temptation
and reduction
The world is rendered thus
The cavernous halls of this space
daunt
Its glittering stalactites drip
luminously
sweet waters
impure as added sweeteners can illicit
over gem encrusted
subterranean alcoves and niches
Where false gods are worshipped
Where diamonds turn to glass
Where purchase is neither
with foot nor by hand
But by extraction and brand
Burning into pockets
through means of exchange
where the purpose of this cave
becomes revealed
Although,
still not
to the naive, the gullible and the willing
Yet I stand strong
Resolute by my informed knowing
I conquer foreboding
fear held at bay
by the most fragile resilience
and I buy in
I buy big I buy small
I buy all the things I want at the Mall
Until I can but no longer
As these halls previously mapped
have seen the bounds of my credit card zapped
Gotta get out
before ruin befalls
My Christmas spree buying
One day for it all
Today’s prompt comes from Dora. In the context of the Crazy Christmas season she suggests, ….. “imagine a moment of pausing, a still point of epiphany.” dVerse
Hi Sean, I suggest you put the ‘prompt’ at the top of the poem rather than below. I thought it was science fiction until I got to the Xmas link! Iola
>
LikeLike
Sean,
So enjoyed your great response to the prompt! Well, they do say that bravery is not the absence of fear but merely a pocketful of credit cards! Your poem does you credit. :>) Loved your descriptions of the mall, not merely as an Aladdin’s cave, but
“dead centre of consumption
Of glow worms on mirrored walls of
perverted fairy lights created by evil spirit”
Who can in honesty argue with that?
pax,
dora
LikeLiked by 1 person
You capture well the hollowness of the consumerist Christmas experience!
LikeLiked by 1 person
False gods being worshipped – I like that line including your message. A good reminder tha the holiday season is not all just shopping & burning our credit card.
LikeLiked by 1 person