I seek to find the tree where and when I find it I will know it for its role in my life spirit connecting totem white fella dreaming me my original culture kit equipped for consumption and strife for directionless floating missing address of life’s mystery missing where I fit cut from “other” as with a knife finished as animate factotum I seek the key in nature’s remit to open the door of relief to release my soul forgotten I walk the bush incessantly search nature’s bridge exquisite in enduring mortal grief to reveal immortal heart re-woken where entity is true and free where body and soul will sit with cup and bowl I turn new leaf full of love and hoping
Today Sanaa prompts we poets to write in the form of rimas dissolutas. In this form each stanza comprises of lines that end with a rhyme matching the corresponding line in ever other stanza. https://dversepoets.com/2022/01/04/poetics-exploring-the-realm-of-french-literature-first-stop-marseille/
A wonderful tribute to the spirituality of nature….how I agree with you…
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A lovely take on the prompt – melodic and soothing!
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This is absolutely stunning. I especially resonate with; “I seek the key in nature’s remit to open the door of relief to release my soul forgotten.” Thank you so much for writing to the challenge 💝💝
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It’s amazing how much we can find in nature if we just look carefully enough
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